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In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. In some countries people encouraged their children to take a year off called a gap year to experience life in a strange new place before entering university. Why do people want to take a gap year? Perhaps to gain work experience or to become more mature. No matter what the aim is, in my point of view there are both pros and cons for getting it. This essay will take a closer look at the issue. For supporting the idea of taking a gap year, there are advantages galore. First of all, traveling around the world for a year can definitely broaden young adults’ horizons. The things that they see, people that they meet and the experience they have during the journey can teach them something that they cannot learn in the lessons. Second of all, taking a gap year may help young people gain their working experience in different fields. They can earn money by taking a job to pay rent, buy clothes or visit some special place. Finally, one main benefit they cannot cut dead is that they may find some potential that they have never discovered before. Young adults may find out that they are talented in cooking when they need to prepare meals every day; or something like that. On the other hand, there are also problems that are worth considering when young adults decide to have a gap year. Firstly, they have to think about money to pay for traveling cost, hotel fee, etc because their parents may not support them financially. Secondly, having a gap year also means leaving their study for a year that may have a great influence on their life in different areas. For instance, they have to accept the changes in the educational system and the foundation that they built before. Finally, getting a gap year may be a great waste of time because when having a gap year they may be lonely. Therefore, they can do everything you want and some of the things may be non-sense but they spend the lion’s share of time doing them, and there is nobody stopping them, which means young adults cannot extricate themselves from their desire for doing leisure. In conclusion, my attention is that I support this way of getting a break for a year and try a different life-style. This is fresh and challenging. However, young people have to soberly consider before making the decision because there are no coins having one side.
Người đăng: Richard Nguyen, lúc 11:19 19/11/2016
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